When I began writing this story, I had spare time , a desire to write something sleezy...
But as the story progressed, funnily, the characters sort of began to dictate their actions.
Like, I'd planned a jolly ending, all the pieces falling into place. Didn't know that Dmitri was lurking there.and it was like Jan and Gaston had to be star crossed lovers...well, almost!
So, I'd welcome ur views !
But as of now, they stay separated...
Susanah